Paragraph: Two Weeks with the queen

Colin changed and learns that if he is selfless anything is possible and being with his brother is more important than anything else in his life.
” when the queen finds out you’ve kept a kid with cancer waiting she’s gunna do you.”

This shows that Colin has realised that even if he had to attack a guard at buckingham palace just so his brother could be cured and shows that he has learnt to more selfless and less selfish .

2 Comments

  1. I’m really enjoying your developing writing skills and your original ideas, Tyrese.

    I can’t wait to do more extended writing with you.

  2. It is very good and I like your style of writing well done

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